Rexy + blue vs 20 velociraptors + indominus rex

Rexy the T-Rex

Rexy and blue are walking threw the aviator when they here an indominus rex's roar they turn around to see an indominus rex with 20 velociraptors running towards them the raptors punce on rexy but she grabs one of their tails and knocked all the other ones off with it and threw the one she was holding into the indominus' face distracting her from blue.

Rexy had already fought 2 of them and won but she had help from a spinosaurus to fight the indominus this time all she had was blue. blue had decided to try and talk the other raptors into helping them fight the indominus and blue had succeded. 

the other raptors jumped on the indominus and blue got on rexys back and pounced on the indominus' head and clawed its eyes. then the indominus threw its head forward throwing blue off its head and into a tree which was about to fall which gave rexy an idea from something that had happened with the second indominus.

Rexy grabbed the indominus' neck and threw it into a tree breaking the tree and causing it to fall on the indominus and break its back. rexy put her foot on the indominus' ribs and crushed its head with her jaws. she had killed another indominus and lived. she roared over her victory.

GG

This is very solid, and I'm proud of this work--very good job! If I were to give any minor critiques I would say make it a bit longer, four paragraphs is kind of short for a big battle. Maybe add some more details to the combat, like the environment--the sounds of bones breaking, blood dripping from wounds, how the environment is affecting the animals, some more insight into the animal's current mood, etc. Wholesome start, I hope to see more of your work keep it up!

Rexy the T-Rex

ok. ill try that in my next battle of rexy, an indominus, and blue vs the ultimasaurus. (the picture below all my comments)

Rexy the T-Rex

what i mean by try is try to remember that in my next battle (above)

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Indominus vs ultimasaurus

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rexy vs ultimasaurus

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make it a dilophasaurus rex instead of blue so blue isn't instantly wrecked by the ultimasaur

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Dilophasaurus rex vs ultimasaur

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i just read it over and it took like 5 sconds. my next battle will be alot longer