Majungasaurus vs Spinosaurus

CarnoFTW

MAJUNGASAURUS VS SPINOSAURUS 

A Majungasaurus was walking through the forest heading for the plains on the other side he had been kicked out of his territory by a group of Carnos "crack" the Majungasaurus looked up from the ground he had heard something suddenly out of nowhere a huge Spinosaurus charged out of the trees it was covered in cuts and had had a chunk of its spine taken out and it was pissed it lowered its head and rammed the Majungasaurus in its midriff knocking it off balance the Majungasaurus toppled over and fell into a little stream the Spinosaurus jumped on top of the Majungasaurus and clamped his jaw over the Majungasaurus's neck and bit down hard blood spurted everywhere but the Majungasaurus wasn't easily beaten he thrusted upwards and threw the Spinosaurus off he stood up blood still dripping from his neck luckily no major arteries had been punctured in his neck he spun round and limped off trying to escape the ferocious attacks of the Spinosaurus as the Majungasaurus ran he saw through the trees the plain that he had been heading for he burst out onto the grass he spun around Spinosaurus had stopped at the edge of the grass he wasn't stupid enough to run out into unknown territory while he was this injured as the Spinosaurus turned and walked back into the forest the Majungasaurus saw his chance he charged at the Spinosaurus the Spinosaurus heard him coming and he spun around but to late the Majungasaurus had jumped onto of him and locked his jaw around the Spinosaurus's neck he ripped his head back and pulled his throat out he was thrown off of the Spinosaurus's back but it was not enough Spinosaurus fell to the ground and died blood flooding out painting the ground red the Majungasaurus was covered in blood but instead of washing or licking it off he let it stay and dry up he left it there as a mark of his battle he then ate for weeks off of the Spinosaurus scaring off other predators and turning the forest into his territory.

alright guys this was my first battle so please tell me how I can improve them and also if I should right a whole storyline on this dinosaur or not. ;)

Something Real

CARNOFTW - This was a very interesting battle! However, I would recommend that you add commas and periods to your work in order to prevent it from running together. Regardless, thank you for sharing this with us! :)

CarnoFTW

Thx sorry it was my first time and my keyboard is broken the commar, slashes and number two rarely work I'm currently saving for a new good quality one 

Something Real

CARNOFTW - That is completely understandable. Keep up the interesting work! :)

Darth Shiro

Though Spinosaurus is my favourite dinosaur...i agree with you.

I Meme Everything

I hate to be that one guy but I think Spinosaurus would be the winner

TheLazyFish

Same